Many people around the world have a family. It consists of father, mother, brothers and sisters. One of them could be the best one. I have a small family. It consists of my father, my mother and my oldest sister. According to me, my mother is the best one in my family. She is my idol over the world.
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My Lovely Mother |
My mother’s name is Ramlisnawati. She is 50 years old now. She was born in Solok, on September 20th, 1961. My lovely mother is in well shape. She is also pretty tall, it is around 170 cm tall. I think my mom is very beautiful with her dimples, tan skin, thin lips, and brown eyes. She also has curly black hair, same with me.
My mother is someone who full with love. She always gives her pure love to her family. She loves us more than herself. She raises me and my sister with her love. She is also fair to gives her love, for instance she never differentiates between me and my sister.
The woman who has married with my father is also the best teacher for me in my life especially to sociable for other people. One thing of her lesson that I always remember is be useful for other people because we are not an individual person, we need somebody else to help and we have to help each other. I had never got this lesson in my school, just from my mom.
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Me and My Idol |
The strong woman who always gives me many motivations is my Mom. She is the best motivator for me. She always gives some motivations to me to face my life, for instance when I dropped, she gives me a good motivation and I can stand again suddenly.
My lovely mom is also a good career woman. She works at Department of Education and Culture in West Sumatera region. She is a treasurer. She can manage everything about her duty at office. According to me, my mother is very responsibilities with her job. I have never heard that her boss getting angry to her.
Someone who has hobbies cooking and reading in my family is my mom. She likes cooking so much. She always makes something special in our dining room. It is really delicious. My mother can make Indonesian cuisine, Arabian cuisine and some of Chinese cuisine. She is the best chef over the world. Further more, my mom loves reading a lot of books such as religion and healthy book. She also likes to collect some novels and recipes. It is an interesting hobby.
My mother is my best Idol for me. She is not only as a good mother but also a good teacher for me. I love her so much. She is the most perfect person in our house. I just can not imagine what it would be like without her.
Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya Erina
My Idol 18264/2010
Process 5 NK 2
Dosen: Leni Marlina, S.S
Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya Erina
My Idol 18264/2010
Process 5 NK 2
Dosen: Leni Marlina, S.S
6 komentar:
I am interested with your Essay ...
You can explain a lot about your idol ...
However, I can find some mistake ...
Like: Solok, on September 20th, 1961. YOu shouldn`t give a comma after write down a date of birthday and alos don`t write down comma before you are going to Date of birthday. YOu should remove it ...
In the other hand, Small Family is the same with Nuclear Family, isn`t it ?? Its better for you to use Nuclear Family.
I think thats all, keep Writing ^_^ ...
giya,..
your essay is good,..
but i have a opinion ,...
in paragraph 2 i think you should add "my mother is..."
keep spirit,..
don't forget to comment my blog..!!
hahahah
you will make your mom to be an idol too in Nk 2,,
hah
but,, i like it,,
so far i don't fine a mistakes,,
but keep pay attention about diction and grammar!!
that's from me,,
:)
that is good essay gia!!
keep writing!! :D
Many things that we can't got from the school, but our mother taught us about it...
Nice essay,Giya...
You remind us how important our mom is...
it is a good essay...
I am interesting with your essay...
your grammar is good..
keep writing...
:)
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